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anonymous readerReport​

2011-11-28 02:53:42
you need to learn spelling and punctuation, and use SPELL CHECK

Anonymous readerReport​

2009-01-16 06:40:46
story said and done hell with english and puctuation

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2007-05-02 01:03:36
Took one look at the huge paragraph and didn''t even bother to read it

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2007-05-01 11:52:35
Take all suggestion from below and edit it, then re-submit youe story......

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2007-05-01 09:21:39
story line ok, break it up some and learn spelling. one whole sentence is tough to read. try again.
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