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anonymous readerReport​

2013-10-25 22:58:17
XiUbj1 Really appreciate you sharing this article.Much thanks again. Fantastic.

anonymous readerReport​

2011-04-08 22:04:17
Any time people switch talking you start a new paragraph...

 Example:

 'Hi, my name is Joe,' he said.

 She smiled, 'Oh, hello. I'm Alice.'

 'Where are you from?' he asked.

 'New York,' she answered.

 'That's cool.'

 ..... get it? ...

JimReport​

2009-11-01 19:16:49
Correct grammar and sentence structure help to make a story interesting (and possible) to read. Proofread - and read - your stories before posting.

JimReport​

2009-11-01 19:05:33
Correct grammar and sentence structure help to make a story interesting (and possible) to read. Proofread - and read - your stories before posting.

Anonymous readerReport​

2009-11-01 11:02:01
so so for openers,
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